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MAURICE STREET ON MY STREET THEIR IS A OF CARS DRIVEING PAST A MAN NEXTDOOR HAS A HUGE DOG HE IS THE SIZE OF A DESK AT NIGHT A LOT OF LIGTH BUG COMEOUT AND SOME WILD LIFE ANOMALE.
 * 1) ﻿ I WOULD PICK DR.DILL BECAUSE HE COULD TELL PEOPLE WHAT IS WRONG IN THEIR LIFE AND HE COULD TO THEM HOW TO FIX IT EXAMPLE A TEEN COULD BE ACTING BAD DILL COULD TELL THEM WHAT WOULD BE BEATER.
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Maurice, You have two of the three assignments from last week. Good work here, although there could be more description and explanation. Today, we will start a longer writing assignment. We will try to have three paragraphs for that one. You will have to stay focused, and I will help you write.

THEY SHOULD NOT LET PEOPLE WEAR unifomois because students would be mad that would tie and some students don;t know how to tie a tie or they don:t like ties the unifomois could be a color the student don:t like if a male student has to wear pink they would not wear it it could be good to wear unifomis other students would not make front of other student gear and they would have to wear vest that some people could not like it or they have to wear shorts they could have ashe legs other students would laugh. They could wear the same thing people would not what to wear the same thing. But they would have to get a dirfent unifomois they meet not know a place that sell school unifomis.

Maurice, you have a good start here.

Students don't know how to tie a tie

Students don't like the colors

Can you think of another reason why uniforms might be a bad idea? HI MY NAME IS A BILLY I WAS HIKING UP A HUGE MOUNTAIN IN ALASKA WITH MY FOUR FREINDS TOM,JAMES,KELYAND MATT WE USE A SNOW HUMMER TO GET TO THE COLEST HOTEL TO FIND A SNOW TIGER WE HIKE UP THE MOUNTAIN A GOUP OF A WOFL ONE WAS BLACK THE OTHERS WAS GERY MATT RAN DOWN THE MOUNTAIN HE FALL ON A TREE THAT HAD A SLEEPING BEAR AND ITS CUB THE WOFL RAN AFTER JAMES HE JUMP OVER A CLIFE THE WOLF FALL.I WAs OKAY BUT KELLY HAND WAS BLACK.JAMES SAW A BIG SNOW TIGER THE CUT JAMES HE FAIL ON THE GROUND AND HURT HIS LEG HE WAS TRYING TO GET UP THE SNOW TIGER JUMP OVER TO MATTAND HE JUMP KICK THE TIGER.AABOLAC FALL ON THEY I WOKE UP A LOT OF SNOW KELLY WAS COLD TOM WAS ON A ROCK HIS LEGS WAS STOCK I COULD NOT FOUND JAMES IT WAS GET MORE COLD TOM FACE WAS COVER WITH SNOW HIS EYE WAS CLOSE MATT ARM WAS BLOODING HE FALL ON THE GROUND I FOUND A TENT I TRY TO GET TOM LEGS OUT OF THE ROCK HIS LEGS WAS COVER WITH BLOOD LOT OF SNOW Tom was lost iwas looking for tom but i found a skull the snow was falling like rain when i wake back up i saw a lot of snow tom arm wasstikeing out i ran to tom matt was down a hill his legs was broke kelly got up i saw a crash air plane it was dark the plane was snow the pilt was sleep he was up his arm was broke pilt i found a flir gun i shot a flair in the air a Ok Maurice. YOu have a good start here. WHat is the story here. Is it about the spiders in the basement? Keep telling the story. Use description of the basement and your feelings.

THE UNKOWN ONE DAY AT MY OLD HOUSE IN LIFED IN I WENT TO THE BASMENT IT WAS FULL OF SPINER WELBS NOT ON THE STEPS. THE HULL BASMENT WAS FULL OF IT THEIR WAS A LIGTH BUT BACK OF THE BASSMENT WAS DARK THE WEBS WAS HUGE.THE BASEMENT WAS BIG IT WAS WHEN I SAW THE WEBS I WAS NORZES. AND I SAW SOME THING RUN TO ME I RAN UP THE STAIRS I SLAMED THE DOOR .ONE DAY I SAW A BABY TURKY IT WAS THE SIZE OF A SMALL STOLE THE TURKY JUMP HIGH IN THE AIR. THE RAN BACK IN TO THE WOODS THEN I SAW A SLUG THAT IS LONG AS A THE DARK DUDE BOOK.MY BROTHER STAP ON THE SLOG IT WAS NOT ON HES SHOE BUT IT WAS A LOT OF SLIM ON THE BOTTM OF HIS SHOE I WAS LAGHEN HE WAS MAD.THE SLUG WAS A GREENS BROWN MY BROTHER SHOE ON THE BOTTUM OF HIS SHOE WAS SLINM THE SLIM WAS GREEN AND GOUWE LOOKING. MY BROTHER PUT HISSHOE ON A TREE THE SLUG MY OTHER WAS LAUGH THAT IS SMALLER .HE ASK MY MOTHER TO GET SOME SOLT THE SLUG AS A ROLLERS THE SLUG WAS ON THE GOUND .LATER I SAW A BUG SIZE OF A LOCK

Good work. Continue trying to tell this story and more examples of what is unknown.

I like the simile when you compare the slug to the dard dude book. Good. It sounds like you see a lot of animals in you neighborhood. You can keep talking about this story of seeing th slug, the spiders, and the turkey. Is your story titled "The unknown?"

TONY HAWK WAS BORN MAY 12 1968. HE IS A AMERICAN SKATEBOARDER RAISED IN SAN DIEGO,CALFORMIA HE IS THE FIEST SKATE BOARDER TO LAND A 900 HE HAD WON NINE GOLD MEDAL,THREE SILVER MEDAL AND TWO BRONZE.TONY HAWK HAS A SON NAMED RILEY HAWK HE IS ALL SO A SKATE BOARDING TONY HAWK MADE A COUPLE DIVORED IN 1993 THE BIRDHOUSE

The smart house My house has three flours on the frist flour has five rooms in one of the rooms have a indoor swiming pool that is huge. Up stair thier are tree rooms their is a laser room you could play flag you have to get the flag and return it to your check point and the other is called storg hold you have to not be hit by the lazer in a other room on the flour thier is a fish tank in the fish tank their is 11 fish in the tank and i have a room wheir robots fitgh each other. IN the smart hose in a room that is called game world their is a hemlt 9 or 19 of they pick a games and put the hemilt on you will be in the game and you could walk around you have to puse so that the game would stop

THE LIFE OF A TIGER My first day at wilkinsburg middle school their was a lot of other students i did not know some of them.Some are tall and some are short i found the home their was a teacher named drane in math class their are two teacher one was tall the other was short in second class it was a class about history about greek,roman their was two teachers also in that class one of the teacher was a dude the other is a female they was talking about greek in the next class we had to write down want how we feel and other things in the next class it was engings class their was two teachers they was dudes one was tall teacher name was boll the other wanger he have kids mr.boll he was a little hieper he jump over a desk did not afer that class it was lunch in the halls their was a lot of people open their lockers my locker was broke i went down the stairs i all most got lost but i followed a groyp of kids