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MILTON CREAGH

1) I pick Milton to be a motivater cause he speaks all around the world to school's an he speaks to students about how we should become a better student an if we do that than we can get a job,house,wife an kids an we have to do good in school if we want all that someday we have to succeed to believe.

MII NEIGHBORHOOD

2)mii neighborhood might be horrible but if we all come together we can change it from a bad part to a good an clean part of wilkinsburg but we have to come or work toget to make a better community Savannah, I like that you have hope for your neighborhood. This is valuable and important. I think this is a good start to a description. It could be more detailed. What do you mean when you say it is "horrible?" Describe these words instead of telling me. Also, you could describe how you would like to see it change. Good start. HOW TO MAKE PIZZA

3)The first step to making pizza is you have to
 * 1) you have to buy tomatoe paste
 * 2)make pizza dough
 * 3)have all the toppings you want on your pizza
 * 4)you need 1 egg
 * 5)you also need grated cheese
 * 6)olive oil
 * 7)sifted flour

Ok Savannah- make sure you are working hard in class. I will put a place-holder grade in here now and update it when you finish. MY PERSUASIVE Essay

4) As the football starts alot of people is talking about who will win the super bowl XLIV. I think the Steelers will win the Super Bowl becuase they come back from players being injured, they have good players, they have a good coach.

paragraph on how they come back from inujured players last year some of the steelers got injured from playing against the green baypackers.when they came back from injury they showed that they worked hard and have alot of courage ,and they have alot of fans cheering them on



paragraph on how they have good players they have good players cause if they get in a fight while playing they stand up eachother

paragraph on how they have a good coach. they have a good coach mike tomlin he pushess them to succeed in practicing an trying to win .they have to practice if they da god

conclusion that's why i think the Steelers does good on the field. Ok Savannah- you really have to start working harder in class to be able to pass. WOrk hard on this narrative. 5) Family ﻿ vacation 4-20-2011

When you go on a family vacation it should be all about fun we should be roasting marshmallows ,hotdogs,hamburgers ,and we should be telling scary stories. When we go on a vacation there shouldn't be no arguing ,fighting screaming or saying” I want to go home cause we been planning this trip for us for about 4 weeks so were not turning around your just going to have to wait until the trip is over.”

I'm going to tell you a story that happened to me and my family.

When me and my family went Ocean City Maryland and we was walking on the boardwalk my little brother got a nail stuck in his foot he was” crying an saying I want to go home mom please take me home an my mom gave him a Benadryl an he calmed down then we went to get something to eat an then his foot started to hurt again then my mom said take him outside an let his foot get some air ,and then we finally got to sit down an eat an then on the way back to our hotel we got lost an we finally found it an my mom said pack me an my little brothers stuff an then we all got in the car an drove back home. an i was mad i didn't want to leave i was having fun an then i asked my mom if we can stay she said no cause of my little brother an i said i wish he never had to step on the nail an my little brother said he was sorry that we had to leave an i said its ok cause of what happenend to your foot and he said maybe next time we go i'll remember to wear shoes.when we got home my grandma and my other brother was sittin on the porch talking an my little brother was sleep and my mom was trying to wake him up to tell him we were home but he said 10 more minutes of sleep. When we got in the house that night my granma made some chicken an french fries ...   the end!!! Great job Savannah. I think you did a really good job on this first draft. I would like you to add more description to the story. Did you have to leave the beach early because of your brother's injury? Did that make you really mad? How did you feel when your family decided to leave? Is your brother ok? You have a great start here, but you could add some more to answer some of those questions. Good job so far. Great intro

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